Yngwie Malmsteen - Gimme Gimme Gimme tab

hi guys, this is my first tab so please comment, i realized there were no tabs for this 
so decided to make my own but i've only found the first part out. anyway here's what i got:

this is in standard tuning.

   d----| u----|     d----|   u----|            d--------|  u------------|
|------3--3--------------3--|-3-------------------------10--10-----------|
|0----4----4----(r)-----4---|--4----------------------11------11---------|
|----5------5---(e)----5----|---5-------------------12----------12-------|
|---5--------5--(s)---5-----|----5--------3--5----12--------------12-----|
|0-3----------3-(t)--3------|-----3--5--6-------10------------------10---|
|---------------(1)---------|--------------------------------------------|
  |||||  |||||  r   |||||    |||||  |  | |  |   | | | | |  | | | | |
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     d-----| u-------------------------------------------------------------|
|---------3--3----------|-----------------|----------------|---------------|
|-(r)----4----4----(r)-0|0-11b(13)-11-8---|--------------8-|---------------|
|-(e)---5------5---(e)--|---------------8-|-8h10-10-8h10---|---8-8h10-10---|
|-(s)--5--------5--(s)--|-----------------|----------------|-10------------|
|-(t)-3----------3-(t)-0|0----------------|----------------|---------------|
|-(1)--------------(1)--|-----------------|----------------|---------------|
   r  |||||  |||||  r       |   |   | | |   | |   |  | | |    | | ||   |
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|-------------------------|
|------8-----------------0|
|-8h10-----10-8-----------|
|---------------(10)------|
|------------------------0|
|-------------------------|
  |  | |   |  |   |
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Key:

|-----|   repeat bar(s)
|0---0|   (if unspecified no. play through twice).
|--5--|
|--5--|
|0-3-0|
|-----|


h= hammer on
p= pull off
b= bend note
(rest)=restand the number underneath is how long to hold it.

*next part of key is about the lines underneath the numbers (using a metronome).

   |= hold note for 1beat
    ||=play 2 notes in a beat
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    ||||=play 4 notes in a beat
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    |||||=play 5notees in a beat
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 if the note is in brakets with a line underneath, hold it for two beats.

 r=rest


so thats the tab, tell me what you think and have fun with he cool sweeps.