Tim Buckley - Song To The Siren tab

I first heard this song on youtube, from a clip on the Monkees TV show. I wanted to 
it but I couldn't find a decent enough tab, so I did it myself. This is my first tab, so I 
apriciate some feed back and possibly some of the picking patterns.
Email me at gazzaday@aol.com if you have any suggestions about this tab.
Thanks

Capo 2nd Fret, Standard Tuning

C(9):e-0-  G/B:e-0-
     B-3-      B-3-
     G-0-      G-0-
     D-0-      D-0-
     A-3-      A-2-
     e-x-      e-x-

Intro
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e|3---2-----2-----3---2-----2-----3---2-----2-----2|
B|--3---3-----3-----3---3-----3-----3---3-----3---3|
G|--------2-----2---------0-----0---------0-----0-2|
D|0---0-------------------------------------------0|
A|----------------3---3-----------2---2------------|
E|-------------------------------------------------|

-Verse

D              A
Long afloat on shipless oceans
G            Bm
I did all my best to smile
D                 A
'Til your singing eyes and fingers
G              Bm
Drew me loving to your isle

-Chorus

D            C(9)
And you sang sail to me
G/B               D
Sail to me let me unfold you
Bm                   A          G
Here I am, here I am waiting to hold you