Rise Against - From Heads Unworthy tab

Hello everyone. The tab that is up already is really good and I am only posting this as
a caveat to his work, if anything because the other tab is much more challenging and
sounds great. The notes are the same for the most part, just in different positions. I 
was going for the actual song play based on live concerts. Here is the link for the two
YouTube videos I used:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O88MrqnUsSI

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kFBaHacreM

As always, their octave work does make up a lot of the sound so you will need a battle
buddy if your gonna get the same feel without using donny's tab (good work by the way),
but overall, the actual main guitar line seems like it is a lot of diatonic movement, 
much in the same vein as older Queensryche. They do the same thing on the intro to "Prayer
for the Refugee" and "Savior."
[ Tab from: http://www.guitaretab.com/r/rise-against/269454.html ]
INTRO/VERSE
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-9-9-9-9----5-5-5-5----9--9--9--9-----12-12-12-12----7-7-7-7----7-7-7-7---|
A|-7-7-7-7----7-7-7-7----10-10-10-10----10-10-10-10----5-5-5-5----5-5-5-5---|
E|----------------------------------------------------------------*---------|
                                                                  *see alt.

e|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-5-5-5-5----5-5-5-5----7-7------------------------------------------------|
A|-3-3-3-3----3-3-3-3----5-5------------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|

Alternate for live version, substitute a D Maj diad at the third grouping

e|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-9-9-9-9----5-5-5-5----9--9--9--9-----12-12-12-12----7-7-7-7----4-4-4-4---|
A|-7-7-7-7----7-7-7-7----10-10-10-10----10-10-10-10----5-5-5-5----5-5-5-5---|
E|----------------------------------------------------------------*---------|
                                                                  *live alt.