Rilo Kiley - Room 8 tab

alrite i think this is a new song yey! and this is my first tab soo.... its ifffy
ill put the chords WHICH ARE D A G   down- u play the chords like this...  


       D                        A                         G
e|------x-----2-----------------x----x----------------x--------3---------------|
B|------x-----3-----------------x--- 2----------------x--------0---------------|
G|------x---- 2-----------------x----2----------------x--------0---------------|
D|------0-----------------------x----2----------------x--------0---------------|
A|------x-----x-----------------0---------------------x--------2---------------|
E|------x---- x-----------------x----x----------------3--------3---------------|

play the notes like above with a pick of the single string n a strum each has one
beat out of 4     strum- write the letter d a g
                          single string - +  
aorry i cant speek guitar

4/4   
 

1234          1234
+ D  D+     +  D  + D
room 8 the invite says
+        D    +    D     +       A
come and surpise you're oldest friend
+    a     +  a   +     g    +
the door's ajar, what's behind
G   +   G   +   A  +    D
in room 8, room 8, room 8
 

(so repeat that...) 
D............................
cards are found in boxes there
D....................A.........
welcome me in to the earthly air
A.................G.......
a baby girl named Jennifer
G...........A..........D
born here, born here, in room 8
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D..........
lock the car
D................
tremble and shake
D................A..........
baby the call was just a fake
A...............G....................
but there she is spotted through rain
G....... A....... D........
jennifer she calls your name

 D            D
on the bed, hip displaced
D                  A
broken nose and a toothless face
A                 G
but she's alive, she's awake
   G         A       D
in room 8, room 8, room 8

(this part is just normal strumming) 
and she whispers,
G              G     A            A     D
we're still working full-time for love underpaid, overworked, uninsured
G          G       A        A            D
we'll work gladly with our hands, we'll take off our gloves
 G                      A
'til it's only love - 'til love remains
  +    G    + A     +D
in room 8, room 8, room 8

D             
I've never felt this pain before
                  A
doubled over the motel floor
                  G
the ambulance it pulls away
      G            A      D
with only tears as my alibi

    G         G        A        A        D
but i'm still workin' full-time for love 9 to 5, weekends, and holidays
G             G        A        A
don't lay me off with severence pay
         D
work me 'til I'm enslaved
        G               A
by your elusive ways, invisible of
   +    G   +    A  +   D
in room 8, room 8, room 8 


Sorry if it is completely wrong if ne1 can improve it pleeeeese anyway
a great band rilo kiley- well the greatest so enjoy!