Mims - This Is Why Im Hot tab

this is how i play it
[ Tab from: http://www.guitaretab.com/m/mims/84000.html ]
e|------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|-------------------13-13-13---------------14--14--14--14--14--14--14----|
D|------11--11--11--------------14--14--13--------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|------------------------------------------------------------------------|

This is my first tab dont be too harsh
This is M.I.M.S. This Is Why I'm Hot


Bass sounds good if you just play each note once
like this 

G|-----------13-----------14-------|
D|------11--------14--13-----------|
A|---------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------|