Daath - Wilting On The Vine tab

This is my first tab and is a tab in the making. Not sure how to lay it out but here goes


Drop C


Verse
g2
 EEEEEEEE|EEEEEEEE|EEEEEEQ |EEEEEEEEE
---------|--------|--------|---------|
---------|--------|--------|--------.|
---------|--------|--------|---------|
---------|--------|--------|88883333.| x4
---5-4-5-|8-5--458|5-5-4-5-|88883333-|
-00-0-0-0|-0-00---|-0-0-0-0|88883333-|
 .. . . . . ..    . . .   .

g1 comes in during the chords snd time through
put heavy vibrato on quater and whole notes
 E  E E  E  E  E E  Q Q Q Q W
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-10-9-10-11-10-9-11-9-5-8-6-2[ Tab from: http://www.guitaretab.com/d/daath/211577.html ]
g2
outro to intro
EEEEEEEE
----------|
---------.|
----------| x2
88883333-.|
88883333--|
88883333--|

g1 (bends first time bar and then:)
E  E  E  E  E  E  E  E
-------------------------|
-------------------------|
-------------------------| 
-------------------------|
-------------------------|
11-11-11-11-07-07-07-07--|

Chorus
 E  EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE  EEEEEEEEE
-----------------------------------|
-----------------------------------|
-----------------------------------|
-12p0------------4-4h5----11114444-| X2
-12p0------5--6-----------11114444-|
-12p0000000-00-00-0---6p0-11114444-|
     ...... .. .. .

tr = 4 notes of tremelo
str = 2 notes of tremelo
---------|-Second time through-|
---------|---------------------|
---------|---------------------|
---------|---------------------|
---------|---------------------|
-4tr-4tr-|-4str----------------|

I'll submit more later.